At one point in the story, she mentions that the king and queen of the Island don't live in a fancy palace with uncomfortable thrones, but in a "low white house on a curving beach on golden sand studded with cowrie shells". I loved that idea. I loved it so much that it sparked a little snippet of a story on its own. This snippet will probably never grow to be a full-grown story, but that's okay. I had fun writing it, and who knows? Maybe someday it will find its way into a bigger tale.
The queen waited expectantly.
It was a lovely scene, to be sure. The deep azure sea rippling in the playful wind, the pale golden sands turning gradually to grey and white pebbles and finally to long grasses, the long, low, sprawling house nestled back amongst the willow trees as the land slowly turned to field and then forest. Beautiful, but something wasn’t right.
Colin turned slowly in place, eyes wide as he searched for the missing piece.
“Something troubles you, friend?” the queen asked. The sea breeze tossed her long brown hair over her shoulders and across her face. She brushed it aside with a smile.
“Where’s the palace?” Colin blurted. She looked blank. “The castle? Where you live?”
The queen’s laugh rippled through the air. “Why, here!” She motioned at the rambling white house. “What are these other buildings of which you speak?”
“Well, um,” Colin stumbled. “I, uh … oh, wait! Is this your retreat? Where you come to escape the affairs of state? Your true home is in the city?”
Her smile turned puzzled, though she was as polite as ever. “City? I do not know these words, friend. Here is where I live, I and all others who need a home. Some stay on permanently, some move on to create their own homes after a time, but all are welcome. Our ‘affairs of state,’ as you call them, do not happen in only one place. How could they, when the kingdom spreads so wide? I and my helpers travel where we are needed, tending what needs to be tended, and when the time comes to rest, we return here until we are called forth again. Is this not how it works in your world?”
Colin snorted. “Not exactly.” It seemed an awfully naive way to conduct a kingdom—but he had to admit that all of Queen Molly’s subjects, and the queen herself, seemed perfectly happy.
Maybe there was something in it after all.
“Most sensible,” Aunt Agatha said. Colin jumped. He hadn’t noticed his aunt and the rest of the entourage joining them.
Aunt Agatha set her basket down in the sand with a thump. “Who wants a palace anyway? Just more rooms to clean. And thrones? Horrid, lumpy, unapproachable things. No, your way is much better, my dear.” She bestowed a rare smile on Queen Molly, who bowed graciously in return.
Colin felt his ears turning red. Trust Aunt Agatha to patronize a queen! Granted, Molly was very young to be a queen (and very plain, his inner voice whispered), but still. Aunt Agatha, he suspected, would patronize the Emperor in Rome were that gentlemen ever unlucky enough to have her travel back through time and meet him. It was How She Was.
OMG, seriously, how HAVE you never read Eva Ibbotson? Well, it was a long time before I discovered her, too... but she really does seem RIGHT up your alley! I'm glad you have. Her fantasies are perfect, but I adore her historical fiction, too. I listened to the audiobook of "The Dragonfly Pool" and ADORED it....
ReplyDeleteI actually haven't read the rest of this entry yet. I'm just browsing over things-- it's been crazy this week! Not sure when I'll get around to reading things properly again!
Most of my childhood (and teenager) fantasy reads were ones that I discovered myself in browsing through the local libraries. I didn't have a lot of people giving me recommendations (except for the Redwall books and the Dark is Rising books - both of those were recommendations from the same friend), plus our libraries didn't always have the greatest fantasy selection (though I could have borrowed every single Sweet Valley High book from one of them, if I'd been so inclined), so my discoveries were a lot of serendipity. In some ways, it's surprising I found as many marvelous writers as I did, instead of the other way around ...
DeleteI discovered some years ago that there is no earthly way I'll ever be able to read all the good books in the world. So I've given up chiding myself for not having read Wonderful Author XYZ (e.g. Eva Ibbotson), and instead put the name on my ever-growing list of Wonderful Authors Worth Reading and don't worry about it after that.
ReplyDeleteLike the snippet, very evocative.
Good mindset! And thank you.
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